
Say what y’all will but I enjoyed the story ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ it’s not getting any awards any time soon but it was a fun, if not short, ride.
But like…”Kale”? Like…the lettuce..? You could’ve come up with ANY name after you were almost killed, and KALE was what you gave yourself? The name you became the empress with? Even Oz was a cuter name than Kale- oh brother

Henry is a POS, duh, but I do think he has his own twisted love for Victor.
His heart clearly yearns for him, dick clearly desires him- but his head personality strikes me as sadistic. The blood kiss scene, the teasing; he wants to monopolize and get an affirming reaction out of Victor. I think he saw him watching from the door and said what he said on purpose, and maybe I’m guessing the plot too far ahead- but I also think he killed Victor’s family. Two crazies in love with each other vibes.

It’s not total ass, but the story progression is confusing and the characters feel disingenuous. It goes from point A to point B way too fast, and the ML doesn’t grow fundamentally in a way that makes sense (to me)- don’t even get me started on the miscommunication between these two- Fucking TALK omfg. It has its sweet moments, like the love confession and the epilogue, but everything else? Like I said, no sense. And the rape was completely out of left field and left a bad taste in my mouth towards the ML for the rest of the series. I’m holding out a lot of hope for the sequel, it’s going pretty good so far.

I like the general concept of “single father omega” x “alpha who pines but has no idea about kid”, so holding out a lot of hope for this one, but it’s still too new. Anyone know any titles with that plot, preferably finished or mostly finished?

Other good Omegaverse stories:
Dog and bird
Struggle
The boundary of fragrance
Scent spark
Love shuttle
Blood link
Perfect Omega
Omega complex
Alpha trauma
Minmotion syndrome
Beyond memories
Butler
Willow love story
Written in the stars
Smyrna and capri
Melting into you
Define the relationship (alpha x alpha)
That's all I can think of now. Enjoy
Pretty sure this is that 2nd time in a storyline she’s been misunderstood to be the bottom’s lover she’s continuously catching strays