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I think his inner thoughts and the way he speaks to her for the first 60+ chapters is pretty rude. Like he gets annoyed at her for being meek and having low self esteem. You literally did a background check on her, so you know she’s been used (for her body too) for like the last ten years of her life, and her failing the test to become a cleric clearly really impacted her view on abilities and self worth. So yeah, she’s gonna be a little self depreciating

The mafia threatens Ewon into working for a loan shark, where he's forced to run dangerous erra...

First chapter and all he did was look around and smile when his friend harassed the main girl, purposefully pushing into her and making her scrape her hands, then tugging at her skirt

The SA while he was asleep (I had hope cause he stopped the penetration when he said it hurt but no, this guy is disgusting), the straight up rape while he was awake, not that being asleep makes it better but he was begging him so he can’t even pretend to have some illusion of consent, killing people for no reason, the Ml blaming himself for not saying no harder?? Or somehow thinking he lead him on. I don’t understand, this was so disgusting I was physically cringing and holding my breath, I skipped past the first two rape scenes hoping to see him kill this guy or run away and I couldn’t take it anymore, only to come to the comments of people praising it and essentially saying he doesn’t end up getting away from him. I’ve read stories with SA and obsession but this isn’t it, this is just gross. There is no love, this is only defilement. You’re all foul beings.

Renta: He could never tell him the way he feels about him... but getting physical is different!! Kei...

People talking about how this is a great enemies to lovers have some screws loose. Even if we ignore the enemy bit, this wasn’t even a good progression to lovers, she forgave him pretty much instantly and started caring about him. It happened so fast that I feel next to zero chemistry. Literally any other “my husband was an asshole and killed me/ made me kill myself” is better than this. Nothing is “peak” about it.

It’s not like he didn’t remember killing her each life, he was actively hunting her down. Insisted she would never get away, it ain’t even like those other stories where it just turns out he was going to scare her or something, dawg was slashing through her. Saw her actively getting abused in one life, felt 1% sorry for her and decided to hack into her anyways. Also she never fights back, not one of her lives is she ready waiting to hurt him, she tries to run away every single time and he still hates her. When he catches on to the rebirth thing (which is immediately) he lives his lives out waiting to kill her. People that defend him, saying he’s essentially not progressing mentally past that of a child, do children not have empathy??!! How does this excuse hunting people down and killing them? He actually lives longer than three seconds each time so he’s got some time to think about things. He’s just an A**hole. He sees her pathetic situation each time he kill her, and decides to do it again anyways.

Also, as I mentioned he remembers every single time, and realises when she’s working to gain his favour and avoid death and he actively works against that. Tells her essentially that no matter what she does it’s not going to change anything and he’s going to kill her anyways. How do you see someone fighting for their life and it mean nothing to you?? He understood how horrible it felt when his entire family had to die for absolutely no reason, because it meant nothing to her father, so how can he kill her and not see that he’s doing the exact same thing except worse?

Another thing that just doesn’t make sense, is she said she can’t remember exactly how it feels to die, but she remembers every moment leading up to it, the fear of being chased for like 10 years, living every moment in absolute terror, and being resigned to the fact that all her actions and efforts are futile. One of her lives she has a mental breakdown because of it. Then the very next one she’s feeding him medicine and tending to him. Like how are you not screaming at the sight of him and losing your marbles, even after doing that he still doesn’t care. Not even in the next life either I believe. She already thinks of him pretty favourably and then the major tipping point is him punching a wolf for her then she has next to no distrust or ill thoughts about him

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Mason, a mercenary, dies after being betrayed by his teammates. However, the moment he opened his ey...

I skipped till the end after seeing that duke or whatever telling him to go find her in the palace. Like damn, leave her alone. From what I can see, they’re on good terms somehow, which makes no sense considering he nearly killed her and she lost years of her life in a coma. Then she wasted another 10 years or whatever looking for Hansel and Gretel. Living stressed out and spending all her money! Because of him!!! Oh, and he literally had her on the run, living in hiding and fearing for her life!

They lied about him being dead because of his “good deeds”, I can’t imagine what would excuse what he did to the main character, and that fairy he killed for literally no reason. He killed her and had someone else just hide her body. He treated her like garbage. Also, that time he was mad that he didn’t break Hansel’s wrists??? A child?

They need to look at the authors internet history or something, some really questionable morals (or lack of morals). The beginning where they treated a 13 year old’s infatuation towards a full ADULT like it was normal, was a hard read too. Setting up a whole romance with someone she admitted to practically raising??? Also how was he taller than her at 13?? Is she like 130cm or???

So many things just don’t make sense, like she honestly didn’t seem too interested in staying with them after spending Years looking for them. Guess they’re adults now but like ??? She barely asked about Gretel, if at at all. Even tho she still hadn’t seen her.

Anyways, I guess I’ve seen plenty of other stories somehow turnaround whole criminals, so maybe somehow it makes sense that they forgive him. Personally, I think I lost brain cells reading this and I hope that white haired dude gets punished.
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I was pretty into the first 30 chapters but as soon as the emperor got weirdly obsessed with her, I feel like the writing went downhill. Like all of sudden dawg is constantly on his knees for her? And what’s that weird stuff about her smell? He was also supposed to have some deeply rooted complex around his mother, which is why he was so into that blonde girl, and then he was just over her?? He let her go a little too quickly, considering how he was speaking to the MC. Didn’t really make sense to me. His whole character just felt like someone wrote him in five minutes. The power dynamics didn’t really make sense either. The whole thing is just poorly written. I don’t usually write stuff like this, but y’all have some overwhelming positive things to say about this story.

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I like me some red flags but the seme is a straight manipulative SAr. One of my credentials is that I kinda like Palace Of Bardo… dawg got the main dude addicted to drugs, broke his feet or something and had him wanting to commit sudoku just so he could get away from him. Don’t doubt me when I say I like red flags, this guy ain’t it. He’s just a disgusting criminal.

His forceful behaviour makes my skin crawl, and that was before they “slept” (actually looks more like SA to me) together. I thought he might magically be more gentle after (usual story logic). No, he threatens him with a knife.

The main dude is so scared of him that he trembles in his presence, yet as soon as he kisses him he’s suddenly fine??!?! The main dude is an idiot. I think I genuinely lost brain cells reading this. This isn’t even like, hot possessiveness that stems from deep desire, the Seme treats him like a thing. He knows he’s scared but he forces him anyways. Really awful read, I know y’all will do it anyways, but hopefully afterwards, you’ll find my comment and feel a little less alone in your frustration.