beta
I was pretty into the first 30 chapters but as soon as the emperor got weirdly obsessed with her, I feel like the writing went downhill. Like all of sudden dawg is constantly on his knees for her? And what’s that weird stuff about her smell? He was also supposed to have some deeply rooted complex around his mother, which is why he was so into that blonde girl, and then he was just over her?? He let her go a little too quickly, considering how he was speaking to the MC. Didn’t really make sense to me. His whole character just felt like someone wrote him in five minutes. The power dynamics didn’t really make sense either. The whole thing is just poorly written. I don’t usually write stuff like this, but y’all have some overwhelming positive things to say about this story.