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Tbh, it's freaking good!! I was iffy bout their dynamic at first with Luso being involved with Shagar first then his brother, Fio, entering the scene for the plot and then it all unravels like WHUTTT.
Anyway I was smiling throughout reading this because the banters were just breaking typical cliche conversations and one thing I can say is, they match each other's freak XD I feel bad for Luso, but man fumbled hard fr (￣∇￣")
The world building is so good as well, I would love to see more from the author, in a similar verse ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
9.8/10 ♡(> ਊ <)♡