As someone who lost a parent at a young age, literally hit every mark word for word. It gets weirder when you grow up too. You wonder what they would think of you and all of the things they have/will miss. You start wondering what they were outside of being “mommy or daddy.” Tears are streaming as I write this. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.









The action is actually really good, I’ve never seen a first person pov like that before and it was done really well, I felt the panic and urgency of it all. Too bad this plot is ass.