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Almost didn't get shit because of how fast pace it was,,, there's no fucking timing and build up (ik it's bcoz it's still 10 ch but still.. it's a meh)

Also how the mc's emotion switch up doesn't seem all natural to me. Idk how to explain it well, but it feels lacking when we're talking abt his internal dilemma abt dying and wanting to live.