beta
The premise of the story was very interesting but I feel like it lost it there in the middle..I don’t rlly understand 100% of what was happening. There were def many other parts which also didn’t make a whole lot of sense, like the part where he mentioned “I kept cumming inside knowing he COULD get pregnant”. I feel like those parts had translation errors or smth so now I’m left thinking,
Was it the story’s fault that it didn’t start to make sense or was it the translation that made things way more confusing and complicated than it was supposed to?