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I wanted to this to be as interesting as the premise set up. I get the biblical touches the Shepard, Lamb, and Wolf, but this ending is rushed as hell. I was genuinely hoping for at least 30ish chapters are lust and manipulation. Where we watch Dennis succumb to Todd and ultimately give into him or stand against him by the end to save the Sheep aka himself. Honestly I knew it was going to be an angsty story but this didn't feel like angst because I was left wanting more.

I assume Todd killed the sheep and fled and Dennis being so in love fell to his death thus becoming a willing sheep himself. But man did that not hit me like I thought it would
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