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I have quite a few complaints about this story. Something is really feels off, and I can't quite put my finger on it. In one chapter, Lean despises him, but by the next, he seems to soften. The same goes for the top character—his personality does a complete 180 degree turnaround in just a single chapter.
Additionally, the father's animosity seems utterly pointless. Why would he want a grandson born from his enemy's lineage? It would make sense if Lean's dad were his ex, but that’s not the case. Besides, why does he keep meddling in his son's love life? Is it to toughen him up? I highly doubt that’s the reason.
This story really needs more depth!!!! Author's reason are pointless!!
And then there's the four-eyed doctor, who comes off as quite suspicious. But I'm hoping he and Lean end up together, while the white-haired dude meets his end, allowing their son to be with Lean.