beta
i finished reading this and i really don’t see any progress within their relationship/dynamic. there should be something at least after almost 90 chapters. and how is he more insane than ceaser? he is not at all. ceaser was obsessed because he was in love dangerously. but i don’t see ilay’s feelings at all. only in a few chapters. the story looks like more focused on army nonsense. even xinlu looked more hooked on him lol i hope in the next chapters i see more passion between ilay and tay. because it kinda gets boring..