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they have this brat/master dynamic in bed and i DO like reading that but for these characters it feels a bit out of place? ppl who r brats typically have alot of control of their lives. and with masters its kinda the opposite, they dont have this kind of control outside of the bedroom. so its weird for them to have this dynamic in bed when the both have the same power dynamic (with the same person) outside. Zeoh has the power to make decisions that Rawon cant refuse in the workplace. its almost like they brought the boss/employee dynamic to the bedroom.
not to mention how their was no communication on kinks and its LITERALLY their to first time in bed with eachother how can they know if the other likes/hates it or not? that kind of plot hole i can forgive tho