beta
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story is pretty good! i feel like the writing and pacing and dialogue is a bit amateurish but the MC is great so he makes up for it. I dont really like ML that much tbh :( but i dont hate him either. its just that the story is setting him up to becoming stronger than MC I DONT WANT THAT. i want MC to be overpowered forever. ik its selfish but i also want him to just rest, not die, but live happily even with all his strength. let him enjoy his retirement.