I've been reading this years ago. About 2-3years from it's first release and I've always been waiting for its daily releases and after re-reading the story from the bottom up to the latest, I feel like the story from 1-40 felt really good. It had a story that was flowing really good and after that it felt so bland. Everything was repetitive, and how some chapters (ranging 3-4 consecutively) are fan service. Don't get me wrong, I don't mind the fan service but having the plot delayed by it is what irks me. The romance and the misunderstanding was funny at first and I really did find it interesting, but again, having to see it oh so repetitively makes me think that the author ran out of ideas. And clearly after 100+ chapters did they only decide to return to the "Brother demon seed plot" not to mention, a random addition of the Rival character of the OG ML. It felt so forced that she was so instantly powerful and not a single background story but only a simple line explanation of who she is and what her capabilities are.
Tbh, I personally think that the author ran out of ideas on how they should continue with the plot and recycled it until they had a decent enough amount of chapters to continue on with the main plot.
Well I think the demon seed thing and having to kill her brother is supposed to be important for the plot and character development for hajin. I think all that filler was supposed to make him becoming attached to his place and involvement in the world and it’s characters more natural and therefor the shock of killing him and betraying bonds he’s formed more realistic/understandable and less out of place, aka he was viewing the characters less as characters he created and more as real people who rely and trust him. Mayve it dragged on and most people didn’t like it, but if the author hadn’t established some sort of bond between him and nayoon, him killing her brother wouldn’t have as much of an effect on him. Also him becoming comfortable and complacent in being im this world and being a student etc would’ve also not made sense without the context of all the time he spent there doing normal things and making friends/relationships and him realizing how much those kids now trust and rely on him. So idk I guess u could say it’s repitive and recycled but I think that the point, like you get used to a certain daily lifestyle and before you know it ur attached and changing it is overwhelming.
Or perhaps not realistic but impactful is a better word for it lol, otherwise neither hajin or us the readers would’ve felt that bad about him having to kill her brother regardless of how objectively tragic it is (for the brother at least anyway, imagine waking up from a coma, ur little siblings all grown up, and now you have to die immediately bc some asshole grew some weird shit inside u, which is horrifying btw lmfao, and it will also ruin any good reputation you’ve built in your life as a hero, that’s actually pretty tragic tbh)
Like having to die without having your name cleared type shit, but I digress, I do think it dragged on in some ways but I do wish I got to see more of the actual school and the lessons and tests and stuff sad that it’s cut short, I also care less about the relationships and other characters tbh (which is not usual for me I typically like character heavy plots and getting to know the different characters but tbh a lot of the characters in this are kind of boring but I feel like it’s probably because they’re all just kids lol)
It's just sad that there are 3 parts
Og Arok + Og klop
Og Arok + Klop
Arok + Og Klop
I'm a bit sad with the knowledge that both Og Arok and Og Klop will never be able to see each other again but only gain love from the versions of the timeline their in.
Don't get me wrong, what they had was toxic and that seeing each other will only cause them pain, and still, it's just a thought that both of them will never have the opportunity to reconcile.
Anw, I'm just really happy that Og Arok found happiness. He deserves every joy that he has in his life. Tho on a more unserious note. How the hell did Og Arok get into ruin the 2nd time HE ALREADY TRANSMIGRATED and still gets scammed. I'm baffled! Not to mention, he has a keen ability on skimming pages and being able to memorize them on a short period of time.
Anw, thank you for listening to my tedtalk
So, there are 3 timelines? Original which happened in season 1, then aeroc with past memories, and other timeline is klop with past memories? Damn I love complicated webtoons
It isn't emphasized in the MANHWA but in the novel, Tia made sure to ask the grandfather, father, aunt and twins for help to make sure that when Lorraine leaves she knows that her family supports her decision.
We start off with Perez getting Lorraine from the balcony, they then meet the twins, which was supposedly irrelevant since they could just grab the horses in the stables, but rather the twins were waiting with the horses to show that they were "there for her".
Next was Tia persuading their grandfather to somehow make sure that the following night, there will be "no guards on-duty" and the gate would be opened a little, with Lorraine's ability to seduce, she realized that grandfather was helping as well. To which she realized that how greatful she is to have such wonderful family and how "sad/disappointed" she is to her own parents, brother.
They then finally meet avinox, and that pretty much ends the chapter, I'm just sad how they didn't emphasize that the whole family LITERALLY helped her escape and the chapter felt rushed
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I would have tove to see all that it sound really lovely
Finished it in one sitting and I was laughing my ass off. Especially the part where reinhardt was in the pub and told them his grand scheme of "I plan on freeing the elfs, orc, dwarves" Then Cyrus cuts him off with "You plan to free them to the wild?" I cant It was too funny, and there was a bg character with a reaction that wants to kill him.
Yooo hear me out, WTF. Ive already read this this part of the story and in the future. The girl she was talking to who has the 10% buff will join her guild and since she joins her guild they get an additional guild buff and once that happens the hunter all over the world will be interested in his guild.
And so his guild became a "Nurturing guild" where they recruit hunters to receive the additional buff of his guild.
So anyway, the first country who had the opportunity is the USA and they were offering it to the no. 1 hero of USA but he refused due to their history together.
And my question is WHY TF DO I KNOW THAT. I DIDNT READ THE NOVEL OR ANYTHING. THE INFO IS JUST ALL IN MY HEAD, I am so confused because my brain is telling me that ive read this before and I am sure I did but it seemed like it mass released this June 17, I am so confused, Am. I CRAZY?!?
Because is the previous to last chapter recently posted... (づ￣ ³￣)づ
This is all part of Moon-owl's manipulation to garner views from the audience. Getting Obsidian to fall for platinum, tricking platinum into thinking that Amber is the real Marianne.
And as well as forcing Obsidian to join the competition against her will (Tempting her with an offer she can't refuse "freedom to her husband).
Like literally. Everyone is under Moon-owl's puppetry. It's all going according to his plan.
Yep he's a show coordinator so it makes sense but the fact that he may be the boy in the library has me holding on, I mean when you think about it its sus MC, someone already married, was scouted in the first place, it must be because she was on his radar since forever.
NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT THIS LIKE THAT OMG
I don't mind that but I don't like the idea that he has been playing with everyone's emotion. Especially Obsidian's and Platinum. Don't get me wrong, I don't like Platinum. But with his backstory. The only reason he joined the competition was due to Marianne. With that he was also willing to sacrifice his remaining lifespan so that Marianne can succeed the throne. (The only reason Marianne joined the competition was due to the fact that she needed someone to play king for her. The problem is, people sought for her due to the fact that she's a widow. People are vying for the position of Emperor. Whilst platinum on the other hand. He's goal is to help Marianne succeed the throne by becoming king and making a law that allows women to succeed the throne).
They didn't put much details into it but I'm a person who nitpicks on details so...
True, it's also the reason I may not want other male contestants to win but at the same time it's obvious they want Marinn
It cut off but anyway, that's the same reason I don't think platinum would fit well because he doesn't seem to be mature enough at least in my opinion.
idk if you watched reality shows before but this is actually how it's done. its moon owl's jod to gain ppl's attention bc its all part of the show
Why are people so one sided here? Its all about perspective.
Obsidian joined to escape his husband, get a divorce and redeem the life she had lost
Pearl and Red head(I don't remember) joined for marriage
Amethyst, joined to find someone who would love her without her title as "saintess"
Alexandrite, I'm not quite sure what he's in it for bit maybe it's for love as well
Platinum joined the competition with the idea that Marianne would be in the competition. The "who is a liar game" proves that if obsidian was lying to him, he'd feel nothing hate but hate on her because she lied to him (in our generation today that's what we call CATFISHING). Looking at his backstory, tho it was short, he lived an awful life and tried redeeming himself after watching Marianne in the season 4 show. (Right after the competition, he wanted to live his to the fullest and changed. Then just by seeing Marianne happy that was enough for him). To be honest, I find platinum very pure willing to sacrifice his whole-self for Marianne and the fact that he joined for pure love. And that's why he is call platinum because platinum is PURE.
My question is, why is it that people has been hating him when the broadcast has beenn pre-determined by moon-owl himself. (Platinum doubting obsidian, adding Orange girl, and suddenly making himself one of the prospects)
Seems to me that they're playing right under moon-owl's palms. Don't get me wrong, but he seems more like the villain rather than the MC.
Just my cup of tea, don't get me wrong I'm team Moon-owl but Platinum does not deserve to be treated as the Villain here.
I agree!
Owl does seem more like a villain, he added Amber, why? To stir up more drama? He already had obsidian playing up the role.. so why mix everything up?
It’s like he wants to mess with him. I’m starting to question what owls objective is.. I can’t possibly be people finding love.. right?
Exactly. And I see comments people hating on platinum smh when he's literally innocent, just a victim of manipulation from the ML's show to LITERALLY GARNER VIEWERS from the people.
Platinum have been forcing himself on Obsidian since they met. That’s why most of us hate him. Even Obsidian prefered Alexandrite for his politeness and respect for her boundaries (no touch nor KISSING without her CONSENT).
Moon-Owl even tried to prevent Platinum advances on her in that “date” scene in the mountains. Platinum didn’t SAted her there thanks to the wolves Moon-Owl sent.
She did, but let me also add that she almost "got" feelings for platinum but of course moon-owl woke her up from her delusion. And as well as let's not forget that that she is a big fan of Jewel Box ever since she was young. I'm just putting it out here that, even though platinum has been forcing himself on her. She knew exactly what she was going into, tho it might be forced. She knew what the show was capable of. (Later in the chapters, it was revealed that sleeping with each other is allowed and that was the part where she was unsure if she was capable of performing - so I'm just putting it out that she knew exactly what she was going into) And let's not forget that it's Moon-owl himself who forced her to join the show and used her weakness against her (being in an abusive relationship and offering a way out by joining the jewel box).
Tho I am against SA and anything of that sort and I'm not saying platinum is any innocent. I'm just saying that both moon-owl and Obsidian isn't that pure or innocent either.
Obsidian was forced to perform in a show in which she had no choice from.
While Moon-owl himself is the show's puppet master. Controlling how the show would go on
Platinum is only a contender, who wasn't aware anything of that sort. All he knows is that obsidian "might" be Marianne, as moon,-owl forced obsidian to act like her and Mariane was also portrayed in the manga as a woman who had an elicit affair with lots and lots of men(AND ILL JUST REMIND IT AGAIN THAT, even Obsidian knew this and still joined the jewel box event.)
I'll ask u, who forced and offered a deal that obsidian can't reject so that she joins the jewel box? It's none other than Moon-owl himself. He is the game dev/puppet master.
Right? And people are pointing out the fact platinum forced himself on her.. which is true.. but where was moon-owl.. the controller?
I think they forget owl isn’t some night in shinning armor.
WHEN DO THEY RELEASE SIDE 2? I KEEP ON CHECKING IT EVERYDAY. I DONT CARE JUDGE ME FOR ALL I CARE