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I commented after reading only chapter one. My honest advice after trying really hard to finish chapter two is DON'T READ THIS
(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ . The Uke should be on child protection ╥﹏╥. I couldn't read the smut scenes ┗( T﹏T )┛.
Didn't pass the first chapter.
The art had so much potential ╥﹏╥, Zhenya's twin is so freaking hot, that I was giggling everytime I saw his face in chap 1 (づ￣ ³￣)づand ignored the stupid plot (╯°Д °)╯╧╧. The Uke should have looked more mature/older tho. The author must recycle the Seme's face
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I'm commenting after reading only chapter one. My honest advice after trying really hard to finish chapter two (which I didn't finished) is DON'T READ THIS
(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ . The Uke should be on child protection ╥﹏╥. I couldn't read the smut scenes ┗( T﹏T )┛.
1 star just for the art (Seme was well draw).
#the author should be investigated (⊙…⊙ )