I'll stay for the smut but I have a few critiques.
In chapter 6, nobody would talk like that. 'He has no idea it's due to your power to negate other's abilities'. What? Why would you say that out loud? You knew the fact already. Nobody in that situation would say it out loud especially someone as 'professional' as Ian. Also the drug? We knew what drug it was, we don't need a flashback. It happened not too long ago. I know this is so stupid to rant about and those decisions ultimately benefits the readers. But to me it solidifies that this is some weak storytelling. But it's not everyday we get old men yaoi so I'll stay.
Yes!! It’s something called “forced exposition” we even see it in movies and shows. It’s lazy. It avoids the “show don’t tell” part of writing. You have a right to hate it. Most of us do T.T
I'm really curious on the first manga debuting this concept and how fast it get picked up cause (to me) it seems to be popping up left and right.
Somi is kinda like Uni from "Boku no Danna-sama"
Beloved child of the world
I'm so sorry for the tragic backstory but did he lick trash juice? Or is it blood?
Lmao it's blood
You have a good and talented female character. She's strong, have a solid backstory. Use her. Don't just make her a prop. Use her fucking talent. Expand her skills. God dammit. I actually like Yuna but this shit pmo.
This reminds me of BJ Alex. I forgot how toxic the seme is because of how lovestruck he becomes. Like when I reread BJ Alex, I forgot he's scum cause he became so lovely dovey by the redemption arch. Same with this manhwa.
Yes! It’s crazy how much they can make a character change once they are lovestruck ans had their redemption arc
I didn't even remember ml from bj alex was a scum anymore, my god. tbh the lore from the second character left a deeper impression in me
I don't think so. Look at the comment, people still clearly acknowledge Nakwon is a scum bag, narcissist, rapist...etc. They bring these facts about Nakwon up all the time, but they don't do that to the seme from BJ Alex. His redemption arch wasn't even that great, he still doing whatever the fuck he wants, controlling and inconsiderate. He was and still is a red flag. BJ Alex is a very stereotypical bl to me, toxic seme x big heart uke.
Oh yeah, I totally see that. I was talking about myself, like I was the one that forgot how toxic Nakwon is cause I was kicking my feet at his swooning. Then I caught myself and remembered this is exactly how I was when I was reading BJ Alex. I can totally see from the comments that people still know that Nakwon's a dick.
If the second character story interest you, I recommend reading My Sadistic Master.
thank you for the rec!
Rereading this gave me whiplash. I forgot the first few chapters were in black and white. I usually just reread the side stories.
Am I tripping? Or the plot is really similar to this manga? I genuinely thought I was rereading an old manga when I realized the different art style
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/yasashii_pantsu_no_nugasekata/
You’re not trippin. That’s the first story that came to mind
Lmaooo they said fuck it
Seolah baby, no matter how horny you are, let him wash his hands before touching you. Please.... You gotta take care of that orifice