beta
the top has this kind of a weird ugliness on him i can't explain, it's so weird, he looks like a white person doing a lots of plastic surgeries to look more korean iykwm. it's so weird, but still really fugly....i had to avoid seeing his face just to stop myself from cringing too hard (which was hard, since he is, unfortunately, the main character)....it was really painful read.
story?meh, smut? meh, character design? i feel like a shed a bit of light on that already #－.－)