It’s cute. Author draws funny facial expressions. Nothing particularly interesting in the plot but enjoyable. I feel like somethings are missing, like we never found out who was leaving the present and envelope in his locker. Still I enjoyed it and thought the dialogue was funny- I think friends would really speak the way they do with each other. Art is cute, though some scenes that are dynamic could be better drawn though. This feels like the work of an author who can write more complex stories in the future. Just tossing out my thoughts here.
I always see in the comments section people making fun of 'lightsaber dicks' but I actually prefer it.
Whenever I see a redrawn dick (I assume that they are usually redrawn by the scanlators) I'm just like, "This is too explicit for me! Keep scrolling!" I just can't look at it for too long. I'm sure people work hard on it, and I wish I'd enjoy it but I can't.
It feels weird that I actually want the censorship, in all my erotica. Does anyone else feel this way? Well, it can't be too weird.. I mean, everyone's sexuality is different, and yaoi can be pretty weird in general!
You might be in for a shock if u see a real dick someday lol
I think it depends... if it is not an only-purpose-is-sex story then I dont care about the dicks, although in blood bank the glow in the dark looked somewhat off... Well what I cant stand at all are black bars. I used to feel strange about dicks too but since I have a boyfriend I like them a lot, its a part of guys... and itsreally funny somehow^^
Art is adorable. So much blushing. I do like a good ansty story with pining. I’m glad the author decided not to put a sex scene in the first chapter. It would have been very unnatural for a story like this. I don’t really like that storytelling trope.