Why does ch 1 feel more like a promo than a chapter (￣∇￣")
We don't even see the mistreatment or the actual confrontation with the baron except him screaming "you are nothing". It just jumps from the wedding to 2 weeks later to her coming up with a plan for revenge in 1 chapter. Alot of things that are happening to her doesn't hit quiet as hard cause it's all just revealed in dialogue.
Also, why is the ML so pissed that she's going to the library that he has to confront her? Girl you want her to be nothing so you expect her to just sit in her room or sm?
Midway through the story I am majorly confused about one thing, Ella is someone who has read the novel and been the reincarnated in the story once. Why would she go to the empress for support? She knows that kahir hates her and she actively tries to sabotage kahir. So in your second time around why would you INTENTIONALLY side with the villain and hope kahir likes you back?
even in ella’s first time being reborn she used magic to get kahir to like her. so it was less about getting him to genuinely love her and more about establishing her place by his side.
16 chapters in and I just want to know if her feelings towards her brother become better or not?
Ik ray looks naive but he's also just a kid unlike Dorothy who has been reborn. Idk if he knows the full extent to how the father treats Dorothy but he tries to lover her in his own way. She just seems to ignore him most of the time and doesn't seem to empathize with her brother that the role of king to a child might seem really scary and daunting. I just hope she actually appreciates her brother ;-;
COPY PASTING MY REPLY FROM ANOTHER SIMILAR COMMENT CAUSE I DONT WANNA WRITE AGAIN LOL. BUT YES IT GETS BETTER
tbh i get it, i dont like her hate, but i also dont blame her. from her pov i totally get why she stays away from him. their relationship JUST started getting better around chapter like 50 but i do hope she opens her heart more to him. sometiems even i feel like shes too cold hearted, but i can never blame her. shes suffered too much cause of her father, and has severe trust issues from past life. tbh she really needs therapy loll
I should have read the comments before reading this. At first I thought with 69 chapters it might be a comparatively short and simple story but what was THIS!!???
Who TF was the mage Noe?? Why did he want to resurrect the dragon?? What deal did he make with the queen?? Also it took me so long to realise that the dragon was the in the subconscious and she killed him in an instant?? Atleast put up a fight bruh. There's so many things wrong with this I could go on and on.
Also I expected the Helena/dante to look different cause the cover and her past self looked so much more badass. I would've preferred she'd be born looking like her past self and then have a story with the ML.
What does rael mean that is soul is breaking does that mean when he's reborn in this TL he won't be the same??
Noooo I need the kids to have a happy life ( ･﹏･)
I'm thinking he won't be reborn at all
Just when you think you're remembering the plot, a hiatus comes up
Why is the Grand Duke powerful but not the mc. I remember mc taking the potion to convert him into the dark celestial and then the grand Duke only made sure his appearance wouldn't change but he would still be strong or am I confused?
I like the story but it doesn't seem like the mc has any abilities of his own since he's never using them.....
Im guessing his powers are more on nurturing and support type so maybe that's why
I feel so bad for bourbon
Like she's impulsive when attacking someone but she also deserves so much moree
I always seem to like the idea when a person from the modern world is reincarnated and tried to introduce these changes to the story world. It always interesting to see them find a era and time appropriate solution. To see how they change a product to fit nobilities or the masses taste. So you'd think when she introduced coffee she'd try to upscale the product iced coffee, but her huge event. With art and coffee she literally served them in large ice glasses Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
Those glasses felt so out of place in a historical period story.
Ik it's not something to complain about but it was just the attention to detail. I would've loved to seen it get the artistic touch like in special glass designs or sm
I'm just nitpicking ;-;
10 out of 10 agree. The artist are under a time crunch to produce panels and not lose deadlines so they are limited with their creative design due to the time delivery WHICH FUCKING SUCKS. Because if they did have enough time and a good team they could DEFINITELY make due on those details we pay attention to.
The intricacies of the world and story building would be that much better if they had all the tools they needed....so I completely FREAKIN AGREE WITH YOU. Because I would love to see the full picture done creatively.