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Shy bookstore clerk Kosuke Mikado has the ability to see ghosts and spirits, an ability he wishes he...

I think the premise of this story are hella interesting and the world building definitely is presented petty meticulously. Although a good thing about this type of genre (curses/ spiritual energy/ powers) is that you can always pull an idea out of ass and not have to explain why that happened coz it’s just explained coz of the power of curse (☆▽☆)

That being said, I wrote these below thoughts for a reply but I think they r relevant for my own comment as well (￣∇￣")

HARDD AGREEE. Although I wld disagree that I liked n cared for other characters just as much as rihito but to each their own.

But on the rest of your points, your r fucking spittingggg. You are so right on the communication where no one is acc communicating with each other. You guys wld notice that whenever someone was about to say something important to the character/ themselves/ the lore, they were abruptly cut off by distractions such as hanzawa standing up and leaving when kousuke is mid dialogue. And he never fkng got to finish his though again. So fkng annoying coz it doesn’t just happen once where we can credit it to “keeping us on edge” but multiple times in the story.

Honestly, the dialogue writing and progression alone can be attributed to shitty communication. There is this choppy flow when I am reading the bubbles, that it feels like they r doing fucking gymnastics and that nobody is actually listening to each other. This story is also syntax heavy but the purpose for many of them seems irrelevant.

Also, YESS!! What the fuck is the professor even tweaking about?? And again, i can give credit to kousuke for pushing and trying to ask rihito to open up, and rihito just resisting. But I didn’t like that neither of them, but mostly kousuke, didn’t say anything emotionally striking and bonding like the ones u mentioned, but also even “I want to stay with you” “wanna be with you” “you are dear to me” etc etc.
I WANNA SEE THIS IN THE SEQUEL

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