beta
And yet another what-could-be a perfect story ruined by the non-con, heh. If the seme properly apologized (at least, even tho it doesn't forgive the fact that it WAS rape) and tried to make up for what he did I wouldn't mind so much, but the fact that they just didn't care and completely forgot about it just makes the seme such an asshole for me.
If that scene just got replaced by some mean words being said so they'd part in not friendly terms it'd change absolutely nothing in the story and only make it more wholesome with them being so atracted to each other that they wouldn't be able to stop thinking about it.
Anyway, just my opinion. I'm seasoned enough to understand that some authors just would rather go with smut than a good story most of the time, but it was cute enough - 3/5.