beta
Is the art bad? Not necessarily so. But is the storytelling bad? Yes yes yes. There is no flow, no smooth progression from one action to the next. They say the cringiest thing and repeat it too so that you can't even pretend you didn't see it.
A comic artist isn't just about drawing. It's about telling a story in a way that engages its readers. Thing that the 1.5 really lacks. It's really too bad that it ruined such a good story.