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Personally I don't dislike their banter it's just the typical banter between two love birds/ slash rivals that have a lot of pent up frustration because they won't do anything to each other that's why Leon says their flirting. Also it's just a bunch of worry on both sides.

And I don't dislike the main guy because he's just insecure because she's the only one that's really been there for him or cared about him. It's in his past ark I don't remember all the details but he had it bad originally abusive parents I think maybe being on the streets maybe he feels like a gutter rat. I just remember it sounding really sad and then our girl earned his trust and only she did everyone else betrayed or hurt him to the point he lashes out first. He's the typical the world did me bad so I'm super cold yet I'm supposed to save the world trope character. You know the ones who'd rather end it because it's just sucked for them and they can't trust anymore and they refuse to get companions or they turn them into fodder or minions.

But in this story he gets a second chance and he finds out he was wrong he thought he was abandoned but he wasn't so he feels touched and amazed and many different feelings and even wants to return her but he also doesn't want to let her go. He's also afraid of being alone again because she was all he had. The only one he let in. The one who forced her way in. It's hard to let go of something super important to you when it's the only goodness you have ever known.

So in my opinion so what if he shows a little immaturity so does she and everyone else. But I just feel like it's fear and insecurity and all of them are feeling that.

What am I on a streak my favorite stories all keep ending on messed up cliffhangers.....ahhhh I want to know what happens darn. Shucks. Great story though I really like it. I hope it ends happily though.