beta
pretty good. mc reminds me of the mc from out (also abt fighting/delinquents) looks wise.
art is peak, especially for more intense/emotional scenes
it's hinting at romance between mc & yena, but personally i would want to see her with the tall guy instead. (yknow, just seems more interesting)
if they do go the romance route, i hope they develop her more as a character. to me, she only stands out since she's not your typical fl, design and personality wise. but so far, she's kinda like... in the background
anyway, i have high hopes!!