We all read the same chapters right? Why did "Dad" suddenly turned "Hyung". Huh?? No decent plot would that make sense
Imma drop this there's a lot of glaring plotholes I can't even defend them in my mind anymore.
Mc's circumstances is so forced. Alienated for what? some absurd rumors? His looks?(Bro looks the most ave looking guy out there ). Why the need to add a sob story? He could've been just a normal meek guy nothing wrong w that
Also the elephant in the room aka the not-son-but-brother. The mom looks healthy as fuck why would she pass the responsibility of a toodler to her son. Girl you made him take care of the kid yourself??
Don't tell me they'll explain next that he calls him "Dad" in the daycare to not feel left out w other kids?? Bruh... what's wrong being brothers?
Ah wait cause we need a plot device to make mc meet ml again..yeah. Also to add jealousy in the formula. But ofcourse we have to make sure he was actually single all along! Cause yearning u know. How shallow!
Worse chapter I've ever read imo
And of course they’ll explain the dad/brother thing in the next chapters. That’s how stories work. You don’t front load all the information or twists in the first chapter. Why would anyone keep reading books were spoiled like that?
Your potholes are all just plot devices that are still being explained in the middle of an unfinished story. If it was completed, I’d understand why you’re so upset but it’s only chapter 16 lol
Yea I agree with you
I love me a good jealousy and misunderstanding plot that's well done, but this is structured very weakly.
But maybe they'll chalk the kid calling the mc 'dad' instead of 'brother' by saying he's just a kid, I mean I called random relatives dad as a toddler myself
I hope they don't go the route u mentioned even tho it seems likely, but it seems weird because if he's in preschool shouldn't the real dad be alive?
This plot feels so unnecessary...i wouldve prefered if they just kept the MC as the real dad and his being separated or some shit than this
I dunno there's no spark w Mr Whitey for me. Even the supposed hidden "childhood friend" aint doing it to me. Also I just don't see the chemistry ╥﹏╥
To the fellow 3 team prosecutors out there let's all silently weep our tears
And you think the prosecutor is the better option both as a person and relationship partner for mc…? I think you’re not judging based off who is actually good for mc, but you probably like him more based on YOUR preferences. Cause MC has never liked the prosecutor and only put up with him for the baby. Prosecutor has always been pushy with his one-sided feelings.
I know that artist even if I'm blindfolded!!
She could draw smut?! Why is lost in the clouds shonenai fjkadajfbdo. Really the art is SOO MARVELOUS. GOSH! I could write pages of compliments for that artsyle. Also the story is very well written, the tension and twist. Not even a single awkward angle! (Me like that kind of talent!!) The execution is chef's kiss.
I could go on but that'll take me days. I hope she release more stories like this. Banger after banger deym (๑•ㅂ•)و✧











Marinate who. I like em raw
Im a sucker of good art-good pacing. Guess Im a passenger in this boat now