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I don't get why everyone always complains when the bottom goes along with everything, most of the time in BL stories the tops are fucking "psychopaths". I'd feel terrified going against these assholes too. Like come on, I get it when the bottom lacks personality but FROM THE GET GO Kay was a yes man. That's why he has such a high girlfriend count and why women loved him. He's retaliated THE MOST with Zigril, what more could we ask for when Zigril is the definition of toxic lover.
If anything the story is missing a little sparkle. I love it, honestly I have reread it a few times already... But it definitely could have more of a flair of something, I just can't put my finger on what. LMAO Honestly I really like Kay, he's my favorite character. He's so extremely empathetic that even ghosts try to win him over and see their point of views. Like come on, he's special in some way, just not like Zigril.