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Okay I know everyone probably disagrees but after every chapter I just get this feeling, so I want to try to put it into words:
I kinda hope MC values ML a bit more rather than ignoring him or treating him like something he only cares about when he needs something. ik a lot of people like “powerful being kissing my feet and doing my bidding+sexy scenes” romances but I was imagining MC caring for/focusing on ML and ML being head over heels end-of-the-world in love with a kind MC. (Not just a possessive that he could have of an object too.)
I wish it was more focused on the romance! Hear me out.♀
Their romance is motivated by the ML because of him doing the end of the world thing and MC wanting to stop it+the system wanting him to gain favor and stop it. And now a dragon fetish???why does the ML (need to?) flash his scales to try to get MC’s attention.
MC is doing all this work on his land to keep the system happy, and goes to ML when he wants to have sex or needs something from him. ML isn’t mad about it he’s usually just goes “So you’ll do me a favor in return right? We’ll have sex?” the ML only cares about MC being his and sex lol
idk how to explain it just feels hollow. Like, I giggle and kick my feet when they interact too but it doesn’t feel like a deep love between them.
Will their love change overtime? Sooner than later?
Rn it kinda feels like a “see him rule this land” story with a romance B plot. I also need to reread so I probably misremembered a lot!!! From what I remember though this is true? Idk