beta
honestly couldnt even put the story down to the point that id constantly refresh if the page lagged, and as someone with a bit of ADHD thats saying something. but the story overall is very lacking. good plot, good art style, yet its missing something. you have an adorable baby wat more do you need right?? idk i think the author focused too much on getting the story over with (adding more depth to the mystery and the anget) that we werent able to enjoy any in-betweens. more mu scenes??? i was expecting so much building up to the ending then boom. nothing.
plus, i absolutely despise how noah had to constantly chase after kyle as if he was the last man on earth. not to mention him always being a drama queen, making her feel bad and confused instead of admitting long before that he liked her?? adrian had more personality in his pinky finger. noah had more spunk at the beginning too, then after getting her body back shes lost her backbone. total wasted potential of a story