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Still feels like so much context is missing and it’s ruining the plot cause we jumped from past to present but also in the past there were flashes of the future so it’s like ahhh!! Wondering if anyone has separated the adult chapters that’d be cool to read on its own so it’s not so confusing. All I think needs to be addressed really is Jian Yi dad background and their relationship with the He family, how big bro He and Qui met, where He Tian and Jian Yi disappeared to and and why and why they never contacted the others to stay in touch for all that time.. it’s evident Mo was trying hard to forget He Tian by locking away his memories of him in the box.. I’m wondering if He Tian and Jian Yi had to leave cause of conflict with their families being apart of organised crime… also is Jian Yi’s dad actually alive? Pretty sure in 105 he is seen visiting Jian Yi’s mother after his birth if so that’s definitely something to unpack and the last thing ofc would be what the relationship is now between JY & ZX but pretty sure old xian will do a panel where there become a couple so looking forward to that (≧∀≦)