I read a few comments saying it was confusing or too fast paced and made no sense sometimes, but when I started reading I actually thought the first few chapters were alright and then got super interesting. The only confusing moment for me was how the main couple got together so suddenly, other than that I thought the story was showcased alright. I quite liked the pace too, it wasn’t dragged on and actually gave something new each chapter instead of stretching out. I thought it was quite interesting, even if there wasn’t much fluff, the plot is well thought out with different characters having interwoven paths.
But I do see that some bits and pieces were missing in between a few parts where the creator could have added to connect and transition, but other than that, it’s a decent story
I read a few comments saying it was confusing or too fast paced and made no sense sometimes, but when I started reading I actually thought the first few chapters were alright and then got super interesting.
The only confusing moment for me was how the main couple got together so suddenly, other than that I thought the story was showcased alright. I quite liked the pace too, it wasn’t dragged on and actually gave something new each chapter instead of stretching out. I thought it was quite interesting, even if there wasn’t much fluff, the plot is well thought out with different characters having interwoven paths.
But I do see that some bits and pieces were missing in between a few parts where the creator could have added to connect and transition, but other than that, it’s a decent story