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I gotta be honest... I'm not a fan of Abel and Karas being together romantically. It feels very icky to me since Abel knew Karas back when he was practically a baby. I know its been 11 years since then, and it's not like Abel watched Karas grow up, but for Abel it still hasn't been super long at all since he practically raised Karas. It's just a bit weird to me since Abel (and a lot of the people around him tbh) seems to think of/treat Karas as a child (which isn't too far off since Karas is only 19). I feel like the story would be much better off if their relationship was familial/platonic. I am a fan of the actual plot, though. It's very interesting.