beta
So far this is a pretty entertaining read. All the LIs are pretty cute and have good chemistry with the FL. The FL is also cute and funny, but not annoying. Her issues with indecision and jumping to conclusions are reasonable considering her past and that sorta stuff seems to get cleared up pretty quickly so that's nice. Just like her, I'm always thinking, 'Hm, things are going too well. When is the other shoe going to drop?' Which has me wanting to read more and more.
Extra personal thoughts: I low-key wish her endgame guy wasn't one of the initial five (three really). Again, there's no issues with the guys themselves, but I have some issues with the FL having the system windows. Yes, a lot of her attachments to the LIs are mostly moments of her being herself, but there are some times where she's being influenced by the system so it feels like there's a level of insincerity between all of them (to me). This is why I think it'd be cool if the story took a sudden twist where, after she finally gets the ability to properly identify things she wants in a guy, deal breakers, and compromises she's willing to make, the system goes away and she can go out into the real world and find a relationship where she doesn't have a love meter or hints for gaining affection. I think that'd lead to a very fun experience. I know that the system window is the whole draw to this story and my enjoyment of the story isn't affected by this thought, which is why this is just a personal offhand thought.