beta
this is so all over the place im sorry i cant keep reading this. the author introduces multiple plot points but seems to forget them along the way. also the pacing is too fast. she saves ml from being chained, then two chapters later she saves him again? suddenly she's so good with her powers when she had only just discovered them; and then she's revealing all of it to the public already?? and i thoight she's supposed to be sick with an illness where she has too much power that it eats at her health. but she kills a wolf and creates arrows out of her own magic so like ???????????
all over the place i tell u! the art was nice and messy in a good way but the story is just blah