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Shadow Warriors goal is still suspicious. If they wanted to get rid of magic, why so? If it's only their leader's goal the other members don't have reason to do so. Much less to a shallow goal like that. The old dwarf guy for example, he seems a good guy cuz he was buddies with the Hero party before.
If you get rid of magic, everyone becomes mortal. They become weak. Getting rid of magic makes it easier to take care of “hindrances.”
Serie may be too overpowered in the current era, or even irrelevant in a world of peace, but being killed by an assassination from magic haters feels a bit dull. If she's gonna die anyways at least make her death reasonable.