Quick paced. No story development. No character development either so they’re easy to forget. It doesn’t explain how the cultivation works and nothing follows logical sense. It jumps around so much like having the protagonist suddenly beat the main villain without building up the protagonist character and those that support and build his role to make him more significant. Not to mention that girl is so annoying (the one who used Ye Qian as scapegoat)
WHY DOES THIS EXIST???
Most of the conversations here are unrealistic and make no sense regardless of the circumstances. As the story goes on it feels more like the author is trying to fulfill some sexual fantasy by having Lu Mu move in with his teachers which I don’t see the point of doing considering he had a big, luxurious house which he preferred because he was alone and could cultivate.
None of the characters leave any remarkable impression to be remembered by since their personality is so one dimensional that they fade into the background. It feels like every other cultivation manhua that fails drastically in terms of pacing, character development, character personalities, and story development. Hell most of the scenes are so anti-climactic to the situation.
It’s disappointing. At first it was going well but then along the way both the story and the art quality dropped drastically. Not to mention how Lu Mu was part of “Dragon Defenders” and suddenly you don’t hear from them again or how he’s cultivating but you never know how far or when unless he mentions it before a fight.
The beginning is very confusing, there is little explanation/details about anything. Throughout the chapters, the translations are not very good which becomes confusing and most things aren’t very well explained despite Shen Yi being very knowledgeable. The characters feel so one-dimensional, like they all have the same personality, thought process, and dialogue so it feels like he’s dealing with the same people. Shen Yi is also too OP for someone who “lost a lot of his power” going to Earth so it’s easy to forget that detail. Everything is fast-paced, sporadic, and also very boring because it lacks a lot of elements (not to mention some events are eerily similar to Rebirth of the Urban Immortal Cultivator). Otherwise, I think the plot itself is original and fairly interesting if it was done better. I hoped it improved as I read further but unfortunately that wasn’t the case. Since I didn’t entirely hate it but can’t say I love it either.
Very nicely put. It seems that 9 out 10 so called masters that he meets has to have a grudge with him and every female automatically wants him. I agree with your comment.
Not true at all!!! I'm on chapter 144 and there is only two females who like him... so I have know idea what you guys are talking about.
I wasn’t talking about female characters to begin with. Just the characters in general don’t feel entirely fleshed out enough to serve any actual purpose for the MC other than causing trouble over and over again (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I read too many romances, so I was interested in seeing him married with a kid. Most, if not all females I've seen, see him as Deepak then once he shows his strength seem to be interested in him. That's how I've see it reading this. This does seem very repetitive though. I'm enjoying reading g it but it seems that he keeps meeting people who under estimate him, he shows his power, they regret and or die. Theres not much to the story / characters so far in my opinion, but it's still nice to read.
This is promising and a very original concept. But... where’s chapter 19??? Two chapters 18 but skips to chapter 20 ;-;-;-;