beta
Okay the start was promising and sounded like a fun idea. But continuing the story with the same shallowness just makes this hard to read. They made the top think so much about liking the bottom but the bottom doesn't seem to have any development and is just loud mouth brat. It was funny at first but the constant misunderstanding got more painful and cringier. ALSO the bottom never used the top's first name that I barely remember it like damn the gangsters even say it more times than his boyfriend does. What happened with the shaman backstory? It seemed like it got forgotten too. Anyways, this was pretty long for so little progression.