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The story was really bad, but at the same time pretty interesting. I could not stop reading simply because I did not know where the hell the plot was going. The best way to describe. The story is a train wreck. Also, why is there a yoshikage kira clone. I didn’t know what to expect because I found this through Pinterest and I did not look at the tags before clicking it plus I read it all the way through and honestly this was extremely anticlimactic. There was so much potential to make this better but I guess the creator just did not care because this story sucked. It’s like every single plot point was simply put in there for shock value without any thought of the actual progression of the plot. Not to mention all the characters also suck once again there is so much potential to give them depth, but I guess the creator simply did not care.
I do get this is a really messed up story and it was really sad, but maybe don’t draw the molestation of a child. Like if you’re going to imply a child getting stabbed could you have just implied a child getting molested that shit just pissed me the fuck off.