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╮(￣▽￣)╭ I read it all at once for like 5 hrs and lost sleep because I like it, didn't expect these comments though... HAHHAHAH it was fun I was speechless at some parts and Yes I agree to the comments where I wanted to punch the ML but in the end it was decent... I'll state my the pros and cons though...
First of all this story has a lot of plot holes; starting wiwth accepting the sister right of bat and how the duke didn't killed her parents. Wath happened to the parents?
What was the storyvof the fl mother? What about her blood? Her Identity as an elf?
And yes maybe the ML was an asshole but considering he's been 10 years at war, he lacks knowledge of what is love... though i still hate him ahhahahhahah
The 2nd leads, the older sister got pregnant for what? Like considering the fan service of involving heat... it's still not acceptable that she got pregnant and got married without involving her solving the problem... Though thank you sa kids!!!
Hahahahahhahahahha also I loved how the FL become adaptable as a noble lady where she became smarter on how to respond lady like.
It's sad how the story feels rushed and cut some story line that's why I believe it has a lot of plot holes. But so far I love it(▰˘◡˘▰)
10/10 My gallery is full of our FL pretty faces HAHAHAHAHAH