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I am gonna point out all the massive flaws in this story out of the way the 2nd male lead ending is one of the worst things I have laid my eyes on and we can all agree on it.

1: We never got to understanding why the family hates her, no there doesn't always have to be one but good writing will show this to us in specific scenes and instances. What we get is a family with no proper character status, a father who is not sure whether he is doing too much before all of a sudden asking to get her killed, a mother we could have done without she is useless start to finish and a brother that shows no skill for scheming like his father.

2: Her family is supposedly corrupt we don't see any actual instances all we get is word of mouth even worse apparently their family has house mages for generations, from the beginning it us safe to say that we all assumed her power came from nowhere.

3: Who was the weird random assassin guy that managed to infiltrate a warlord house without anyone's knowledge with that much people, it just out of place.

4: The whole temple killing spree never made sense, was it satisfying yes, did it really do anything for the plot? No. Somehow he killed all the priests and could not position himself as the pope, he is the strongest divine power wielder with enough power to rival the emperor and he was on the run????? Make it make sense. He is obviously not someone who respect the law so why is it stopping him now.
5: The emperor and the crown prince needed to be written better, considering the main characters have to obey/work and respect them.

6: Why was the ML female soldier thingamabob assassin, hating on the female lead fir nit giving free hand out when she knows that younger her would not accept free handouts when she was in that situation. And why does she an extra have a semi proper side story compared to the 2nd male lead.

The story suffers from pretty privilege and it's not even that good of a style, the rating should be a 8.9 to 9.1 in all honesty there are lower rated stories with better endings, plot and development.

The fact that the ML and the dragon are together gets me fuming, like it different if he is originally for this world but he is not meaning he knows better than this and yet he does this. I would usually over look this because what do i expect for authors now days moreover worse exist but to me she is just plain unlikable or maybe i just don’t like the authors interpretation of arrogant dragons. Even the elves are mediocre.