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I enjoy this but honestly I think the pacing could be a lot better. I understand wanting to drag out the torture/death to make the revenge fulfilling, but these past few chapters of this whole fight feel really dragging at a snails pace. Hardly any dialogue, and what little dialogue there is, it's just the bad guys repeating the exact same words as the last chapter, and the one before that, and before that. Definitely could do with better pacing, but I'm still loving it. The only thing that could make it better is if he is somehow able to broadcast what all of these fuckers did, so everyone knows they're fucked.