beta
The other works where kinda good even when it was trashy because it had no feelings it was straight porn. Why would you make a story of “romance” on a porn story when you are gonna add shit like the one who realize has feelings for you pimps you still. (not that would have forgiven the first time, but hey the story is stupid),and then proceeded to still be sexual with the stepfather. And how the heck would Th MC fall in love with the man who is selling you for contract, when he did nothing to deserve the feeling. Just participate or look. The first time he said I got nothing against you, when it definitely felt like it. He knows what he did was fucked up because he expected MC to be mad(but Mc seems to think he deserves it or some weird porn logic) and when he goes running to him he apologize knowing what he did is messed up. Again this author is someone who does Yaoi hentai, I just think that making it this long and trying it to make romantic and that the “ML” has any redeeming qualities quality is brain rotting. I'm a perverts myself I liked/hated the one story of the daycare teacher, but with this one I jumped most of it just to see how it finished because they put freaking feelings and when that's involved I don't want to see the characters doing shit if its not with each other.