beta
It's already 15 chapter and there is barely any character development and story, even if this a slow pace story but holy, the whole sequence is just about the bright hair guy keep being a coward, indecisive, fickle the entire time. While the dark haired guy is just "agree to disagree later" and make the story/conflict back to the start again. It feel like it keep looping.
Every conversation even feel like just a filler after filler to make it longer, so many conversations just like unnecessary, without leading it to anywhere.
i lowkey agree (even if i like this). like we've gotten all of the info we needed from the prologue theres no need to stretch it out this much
Pretty straight forward and short, I love it. The plot kinda similar to SB side story, so it's to my liking, the art style also beautifully hot, wish I can see more of older uke with facial hair or stubble, I find it cute and sexy at the same time.