beta
this had potential but the pacing is too fast, jayden was in this other country for what, like a few weeks? and his ptsd and grief and guilt are magically so improved?? also wtf is with daniel, so unnecessary as a character, as a plot device...lastly, i genuinely thought jayden had just flown cross-country in the US until someone said he "left the states" and then i was very distracted trying to figure out in what not-american country they play american football with proper teams and coaches??? girl what. girl WHERE