beta
Got through Ch. 6 and dropping. Lame plot (they put her in jail when she could communicate through writing that she killed her dad in self defense against what is highly likely sexual assault? - also they’re really missing out on enough interaction to explain the Stockholm syndrome happening since she isn’t just around the one chick), lackluster spice (not very creative and way too lacking in showing why the chars would cum from what seems like meh technique - like at least show a few panels of the insides getting rubbed or something), and super crappy translation (SO much of what’s said doesn’t sound like it adds up or just wouldn’t lead to chars reacting the way they do).
Also literally all the chars have been pretty and fit so it makes no sense when someone gets called ugly or not the right shape. Which reminds me that they don’t have boob physics down right which makes it look like everyone had a boob job (which is fine for a few, but why make that the case for everyone - including the virgin FL??).
And why did they wait to put that warning until ch 7? The sex scene right before was rape already (coercion is the same thing and Jua was def raped regardless of her cumming and pissing herself). If Lee is nodding as consent then the translation NEEDS to have that written in since she can’t talk. That warning should’ve been in almost all the chapters up to then.