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"He hates me," um why would you think he even hates you? Dan doesnt like you nor hate you. He feels uncomfortable and wants to finish his business with you as fast as is possible.
I wouldn't mind if our main couple doesnt have a happy ending; and Dan decides to leave once all is done.
I missed you potato!
I want your story!!!
The puppies running after the car broke my heart.
Wouldn't a pet help alert horse-face if Dan sleepwalks?