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Can someone vouch for me? A novel reader of this story??
Like I feel like I can see how the author wants the story to progress but for some reason the artist who's doing the adaptation is confusing how it can interpreted by how she drew some scenes. Translation ain't helping it either.
I feel that some scenes r either super exaggerated and some not exaggerated enough.
Worst victim here is the ML. I can see what the author wants him to (a cheerful boy made to be a king) but how the artist drew him sometimes makes him look immature and dumb...
Or maybe he is. Idfk.
ACTUALLY IDFK! THIS STORY IS SO CONFUSING!
ESPECIALLY THE ML!
He learned who has her hostage and shit she might have went through but dawg is having a blast and only worrying about rumors...
Idfk- maybe a lil more realization in his part would be great? Like "ah shi- the girl I like and the daughter of my master is having a hard time. I can't do anything rn but I should make myself better and do things better so we can protect her when she arrives" shit like that? No?? Okay.