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You served spice, but skipped the soul. Next time, author, let them talk, cry, laugh — anything but skipping straight to skin when hearts are still bruised.
Charot lang… kinda hahaha. It's just that — for me — that scene felt a bit unnecessary, especially after everything they went through. They have a lot to talk about.
And let’s be real: WE went through it too! We were mad, frustrated, sad, happy, we hated them, we loved them — we’re your emotional punching bags, author!! We’re your babies too, WAHHHH. Give us the healing, not just the heat!