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Dropped, chapter 7. Is this good as it roll with the chapters?
The MC is always judging things. He doesn't sound grateful when the ML offered him a room FREE even though they JUST MET. Normal reaction would be to be doubtful at furst, but also be VERY grateful, considering that he's desperate. Everything burned down too. I'd be at my feet if I were him.
The ML was late and he's already thinking and judging. Like, man, chill, you see him huffing but that's really what you think?
Well, I like that he's cautious, he's also better than other uke's who fall on first sight. The problem is that I find him as a character that needs development. Can someone tell me if this gets better?