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It was a good read. I loved how it started and how it progressed. However, I find it hard to process a lot of plot holes. The story is unfinished, they only plastered "The End" since the MC and the ML got their happy ending.
Few questions were left unanswered like:
- We need more explanation about that transmigration ability of the siblings. It was a sudden plot twist. Also, I'd say, they're living in world far more interesting than the world where the MC transmigrated into. What happened to their fight? Apart from money, what other value does the ring has? What happened to the book? Judging from the brother's obsession and his sister's description of him, he won't stop at nothing so he would search the ocean, surely.
- Who is that woman? Maybe a neighbor?
- The ending was rushed. It's very noticeable. The drama that was supposed to follow was not justified.
ANDDDDDDDDD I need more story of Mujin. Hahah The ML has others holding him up, but Mujin has nothing. I find him interesting. I was expecting Mujin and the brother to end up together, actually. I would love to read more if the brother pulled Mujin to the real world with him in exchange to the MC and the plot will roll from there. That would be far more unique among transmigration stories.