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Man, I finished the entire reading in one sitting… I even looked up the next chapters just to see where the story was headed. But are you seriously telling me that not only is half the plot rushed and crammed in, but we're also just five chapters away from the ML and FL getting married? Like—what the hell? It kinda gives me Finding Camellia vibes too.
I was so into the premise, especially up to the midpoint, but then... ugh. Why is it that every time the story builds tension so well, the resolution ends up feeling so sloppy? It’s like writing an essay with a killer hook and intro, only for the body and conclusion to completely fall apart.