It’s been a while since I’ve read fantasy BL, much less ones that focus on the plots than sex and romance. Holy crap, this was so good, I truly was able to sympathize with our MC because of the backstory and the current story going forward that the authors wrote. 
You can tell that these writers truly care for the plot. 
Like, they are really fleshing out our MC and the ML. Plus, their relationship got explored from unfriendly ‘acquaintances’ to friends and now perhaps something more. 
The slow burn on this one was deserved because I believe our MC has never truly fell in love before yet. He was so young going through the adversaries.
 
I want to go in and give him a hug, saying that he shouldn’t feel guilty for surviving well. That he should talk more about his fallen comrades because if I was one of the family members of the fallen, I’d appreciate knowing that my relative/SO was still carrying their identity with them. And they instilled it in our MC. It’s like there’s a part of them in the MC, and that’s a really great gift. 
He probably thinks he deserves to die because he was so young. He needs huge therapy sessions. 
He’s so precious, both him and the ML. I love them both!!!
Yes, the sexy time was good. But, I wasn’t that captivated by our main couple (or only couple). I mean, I was but I was more interested in the story itself. 
I read this in one go, and tbh, I actually really enjoyed it. I’m glad the author didn’t decide to introduce any side couples because it allows us to focus on the main couple. 
However, they also introduce us to a bunch of handsome guys, I mean the water guy is hot, the blonde’s right hand guy with the mint hair is hot, like yes. 
And! We get plots attached to the side characters as well! Like the guy who can control minds or the monster kid. 
And the frog, he’s so cute! I cried when he died, but it seemed like he got revived by our blonde angel. Hopefully the frog is shown in the next few chapters  
I wish we get to see more of the other Vassals. I hope the authors can make short spin-offs featuring the Vassals in their daily lives.
My favorite has to be Raaquin, the guy in armor but loves gardening. He seems like he’s the type to be a gentle giant and that’s just so cute  
I want to see more of them! 
Now, our main couple. I have so many questions.. 
Like, I don’t get it. The story tells us that the blonde is number one ranked and very strong but, the story also shows us how fragile he is and easily faints plus he doesn’t even have attack spells until he picked up the bow and arrow. 
Is he ranked number one because his Vassals are stronger than him? I need to see the story fully unlock his potential so I can believe he is ranked number one. 
And why did he get killed twice by the grand duke? What’s up with that? We weren’t even told why… like I get it if he was punished but killed? 
And you still love your own killer? Boy, you’ve got major Stockholm syndrome. And his killer is also in love with him, obsessively. I mean, every few seconds it’s like he always wants to fuck that blonde bussy. Like, okay, control yourself. 
If he really cherished the king, why did our grand duke acted so hostile? Why did he kill him in his previous lives? 
He has a weird way of showing his affection (and lust). 
ALSO ONE MAJOR THING! Is this the new reality? I’m confused on that still. Like, are they still in the game or has the game sucked them into the virtual reality and now they can’t escape? 
What’s the end goal here? Are they going to live here forever? 
If that’s so, that means blonde twink got fucked by an NPC. You know what, you go, boo.
I still can’t shake the feeling that Eunsan hasn’t bring down his walls yet. Ian is trying his best to win Eunsan over. I’m scared for our puppy top
I love FT. I grew up with it but what the heck. FT 100 has been lackluster. I appreciate and respect that Elfman is getting some spotlight and has a new beast form. But it’s just so unwarranted and it comes and goes swiftly like “ok, cool”. 
In order to make us truly stick to Elfman, they should’ve developed him more before this fight happened. Not just him, everybody else too. 
Like, the other guy got beaten by the bad guy and Elfman was struggling at first until suddenly ‘plot twist’ Elfman survived the bad guy’s attack and one shot him. Like… that’s enough. 
Introducing more villains only for them to get one shot has been too redundant and boring at this point. 
Sigh.
Haebom is so dreamy… like, his personality? His attitude? And how he gets horny for his boyfriend… plus his looks and everything. And I don’t have to mention his package, we been knew it’s huge. That’s a huge bonus. 
The fact that he got horny seeing Ho in an apron. That’s so kinky~ 
I love these two 
I love it when artists draw pubes, it makes it hotter and more natural. But two cocks? Freaky as f
And now we’re happy. Don’t get me wrong, I’m happy for both Alexis and Eugene, and their kingdom.
It’s resolved so quickly. 
However, since they seem so happy right now, I believe this might be the calm before the storm.
Dealing with the same bull crap again and again. I’m just tired of ML at this point. I wanna keep reading for the sake of the fire fighter, but man. 
If this was realistic, the firefighter would’ve left his ass. It’s so rude how the other guy came drunk on his ass and slept with the dude, just to dump him AGAIN the next day. 
This back and forth needs to stop. 
“I can’t hurt you twice.” Bro, you’ve hurt him more than that. I’ve lost count.
Why there’s always gotta be that one hoe who thinks he’s so good he deserves everything. 
“I dumped him cause he was lower than my standards but now I miss him cause he’s fun and my new man is boring despite having high standards.” 
Like bitch, cut this ponytail off of him and drag him into the mud. Better, I’ll do it myself 
I feel like, you can still be together even when you’re not in the same college. It just tests your patience, loyalty and emotions. 
I understand the MC’s perspective but I also understand the ML’s perspective. He wants to adult quickly so he can get a job, and possibly finance himself and then his boyfriend. 
Like, that’s actually important?? When you’re at college, it’s hard to get a full-time job, so you’ll be stuck with a part-time job, if you get a job that is, if you don’t, then, you’ll probably rely on your parents’ money.
I think the MC doesn’t think that far ahead in the future. Like the ML is thinking about their future together, so they can have a steady future without worrying about money. He wants to make money as soon as possible.
Good thing this is a manhwa. 
Ps. I don’t hate the MC, I just think he needs to open his mind to this possibility.
The romance was getting good but the plot was… just average and anticlimactic. I mean, this whole setting was so good. 
They could’ve invested a few chapters for this plan alone. Let the readers truly feel how evil and demeaning Count Rito is. Like, what is his reason for going down the road so badly. 
Let the readers sit with him for a few chapters to see him losing his mind, so that we would understand about his villainy more. 
We’ve only seen a few scenes of him monologuing and then, suddenly he’s dead. 
I’m guessing the author is rushing to finish the story?
But it’s not an excuse to be wishy-washy to another person. 
What if this is you? What if you’re in the top’s position, and you’re being swayed left and right, that special someone got your hopes up only to leave you in the end? 
His trauma is reasonable but not excused. 
Put yourself in the top’s position, it must hurt badly. 
“Well, imagine being in the bottom’s position with the trauma.” 
Okay. So, the bottom is the older one. Meaning, he’s got more experience with life. Meaning, he’s supposed to be more matured than the younger one. If he knows he’s got trauma and can’t commit to the top, don’t bother himself by going to him for sex and affection whenever he feels lonely just to dump him. 
Just because you’re lonely but you can’t commit to commitment, means that you can use people as you please and still call yourself a victim. 
Imagine if the top does that to the bottom. Y’all would be furious. You would be calling him names. 
As much as the bottom defender team tries to defend him, he’s a shitty person. A shitty person doesn’t deserve good things. 
The bottom acts like he’s the victim when he’s not. Yes, he’s a victim of his trauma but the top hasn’t done anything to instigate the trauma. It’s the bottom himself doing it to himself. He’s victimizing himself. 
I don’t defend someone who victimizes themself when they’re in the wrong.
If the purple haired guy doesn’t back off, I’ll raise hands. 
And my baby, I understand he’s in love, I hope the blonde dude truly cherishes him still after the mission, or imma throw hands as well. 
If not, the MC deserves someone better boo.
I understand the bottom has issues. A lot of us adults have them but we deal with them not running away. That doesn’t solve it. 
I understand that he might need ‘time’ but isn’t 7 years plenty of time? He is actually lucky the top is STILL deeply interested and loves him to the core. 
The top is actually incredibly loyal and this bottom with his issues decide to meet up to hook up with someone else. How is that solving his problems? He’s creating more. 
Smh. I was rooting for them. But the top deserves better.
I want the bottom groveling and actually realizes his actions have consequences. Yes, he is afraid that the ones he love will push him away like his family did. 
But does he not see? After 7 years, the top still chases after him. No matter how much the bottom pushes him away, he comes back. 
How blind can he be? I mean, he himself is still in love with the top. Naming his kid after the top. Like bro. Why are you doing this to yourself and to that guy? 
And then let’s say if this is real life, does he think that man will stay? If this is real life, the other guy (the top) will actually leave his pitiful ass. And then he’s gonna think that he is ‘true’ because everybody leaves him in the end when he’s the one pushing people away. 
Bro has it good and isn’t grateful. He literally thrives on drama omg. Like, he could really just solve his problems if he trusts the other guy smh.
But then I remembered they’re still in high school and this is the first time our MC has ever been in a relationship with someone he truly likes. So, of course he will have irrational thoughts. 
But it’s gonna be okay, sweetie! You won’t just break up over some distance, if you guys are meant to be, then it’ll show <3
Something funny and refreshing. It’s not always we get the POV from a seme, more so, a spirited, kind and cheerful personality? And his ‘childlike’ nature is just so adorable to see. 
It’s just a refreshing sight and a fresh breath of air. I’m liking this more as I read it. Plus, his innate sense with kids is adorable! He’d make a great father figure.
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- Author: Pacoz ,kamoshika ryo, kantama
 - Genres: Doujinshi / Yaoi / Adult / Mature / Smut
 

		











